The ZanderDude is back with a vengeance, and a new documentary about Auteur Theory and Hitchcock's work. To all, may you enjoy this film and have a happy holiday season!
I liked your introduction into the Auteur theory, however, I feel like you spend too much time on this intro, speak faster or make it shorter. Additionally, your delivery seems slow paced and I feel like a more engaging voice may help your audience appreciate your work more! With your visuals, I think you need smoother transitions as several of the clips starts playing rather abruptly. This can be irritating as a fade out with any additional audio tracks to your voice over would have been easy and beneficial. Spending more time on the edit I’m sure will help you and increase the value of your project! I did not like the use of titles for each emphasis WITH a lack of an audio. I think your audio track was cut too abruptly, if you had audio over the title, then I feel like the documentary would flow more. At the end of the doc, you mentioned your sources, why not do that during the project? I understand with Auteur theory that most of the information provided is from outside information. However, with any of the claims you made, I think a reference to the claim would have been great to show all the hard work you did! Just work on the edit a bit more and I’m sure you’ll have a fantastic piece!
I feel that your ideas rubbed off well, yet the transitions seemed to be abrupt. I like how you started off in the beginning mentioning what the auteur theory was, but I feel like you spent a little too much time on that part of the project. I thought that your information was really good, but the presentaiton was lacking a dynamic tone. If you spoke a little quicker and added a dynamic to the tone of your voice, this would have been much better. I thought that when you used visuals, you did a great job. Your images and videos correlated well with what you were talking about. You should have spent more time adding images and videos in your edit because a black screen can be very boring to look at. If you did spend more time on the edit, feel that your project could have been much better.
I really like how you were able to really point out Hitchcock's individuality in his work and his habits that he has with film making, especially his cameo appearances and his intense symbolism with birds. You seemed to have a really great understanding of Hitchcock and his little quirks and it was explained greatly through your documentary. The problem I had was only the way you had presented it. I felt as if you weren't able to present this as enthusiastically as possible. Short story: you were speaking too slow. Try to make it more interesting for the audience. You had a great amount of knowledge, it just was given way too slowly and it had the potential of getting boring for the audience. Also, your visuals were lacking in numbers, but it brought you back up by their message, and the visuals were able to really help get your point across, so that was positive. I would just enjoy more pictures instead of a black screen, but the images and video clips that you did use heavily aided your overall message and point using the auteur theory.
I liked your introduction into the Auteur theory, however, I feel like you spend too much time on this intro, speak faster or make it shorter. Additionally, your delivery seems slow paced and I feel like a more engaging voice may help your audience appreciate your work more! With your visuals, I think you need smoother transitions as several of the clips starts playing rather abruptly. This can be irritating as a fade out with any additional audio tracks to your voice over would have been easy and beneficial. Spending more time on the edit I’m sure will help you and increase the value of your project! I did not like the use of titles for each emphasis WITH a lack of an audio. I think your audio track was cut too abruptly, if you had audio over the title, then I feel like the documentary would flow more. At the end of the doc, you mentioned your sources, why not do that during the project? I understand with Auteur theory that most of the information provided is from outside information. However, with any of the claims you made, I think a reference to the claim would have been great to show all the hard work you did! Just work on the edit a bit more and I’m sure you’ll have a fantastic piece!
ReplyDeleteI feel that your ideas rubbed off well, yet the transitions seemed to be abrupt. I like how you started off in the beginning mentioning what the auteur theory was, but I feel like you spent a little too much time on that part of the project. I thought that your information was really good, but the presentaiton was lacking a dynamic tone. If you spoke a little quicker and added a dynamic to the tone of your voice, this would have been much better. I thought that when you used visuals, you did a great job. Your images and videos correlated well with what you were talking about. You should have spent more time adding images and videos in your edit because a black screen can be very boring to look at. If you did spend more time on the edit, feel that your project could have been much better.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you were able to really point out Hitchcock's individuality in his work and his habits that he has with film making, especially his cameo appearances and his intense symbolism with birds. You seemed to have a really great understanding of Hitchcock and his little quirks and it was explained greatly through your documentary. The problem I had was only the way you had presented it. I felt as if you weren't able to present this as enthusiastically as possible. Short story: you were speaking too slow. Try to make it more interesting for the audience. You had a great amount of knowledge, it just was given way too slowly and it had the potential of getting boring for the audience. Also, your visuals were lacking in numbers, but it brought you back up by their message, and the visuals were able to really help get your point across, so that was positive. I would just enjoy more pictures instead of a black screen, but the images and video clips that you did use heavily aided your overall message and point using the auteur theory.
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